14HRS Observant Poem” by Teny Gatwech Deng: A Poem Analysis and Its Lessons
Poems often serve as mirrors reflecting our innermost thoughts and feelings. “14HRS Observant” is one such poem that delves into the complexities of travel, procrastination, and the power of observation. This article aims to analyze the poem, highlighting its key themes and the valuable lessons it offers. By understanding the nuances of this poem, readers can gain insights into how to improve their own lives through the art of observation and mindfulness.
Poem Context
The poem “14HRS Observant” begins with the poet preparing to travel, capturing the anxiety and last-minute rush associated with it. The setting transitions from the poet’s room to a bus station, where they encounter various characters, including a fellow anxious traveler. This scenario sets the stage for a journey not just in the physical sense but also in terms of self-discovery and personal growth.
’14HRS Observant’
The title "14HRS Observant" suggests a period of intense observation, likely during a 14-hour journey. This period becomes a metaphor for a deeper level of engagement with one's surroundings and thoughts.
14HRS OBSERVANT
I suppose to be at the bus station by 12:00pm,
Yet am still in the room preparing my belongings, as I pack,
My heart beat fast. My desires of going back scare me,
“I can’t go back”, I say that to myself.
I love seeing, thinking, and reasoning. To some few things,
Such as people, animal and environments. When am traveling.
I committed to change my way of traveling by doing the followings.
I will observe more! Listen more! Then see More!
12:30pm I was in the station. Ready to travel.
Am not good at killing time, as many said “African Times”
But I read most bestselling books by “New York Times”
I remove a Daily Nation paper read a few before I take nap,
Cause an Editor can change the published contents with nap of a finger.
I update myself regularly with news, books, and silent language of the universe.
While waiting for others passengers. There a lady with Ajab next to me.
She was anxious to travel, afraid to be late for her destination.
“When it come to traveling am not good at taking care of my luggage,”
She said as worry read over her face.
She smiled back with her true statement.
“I should be more observant, then seeing more’’
‘’what actually is apart of Observation and the seeing” I unneedled the silent.
Written By Teny Gatwech Deng
